two $3 9mans on PS for review if I may :)

very happy to see the tournament trimmer working again so I have two $3 9mans on PS which I think reflect the state of my playing style pretty much and I would be very happy to get some feedback on it.

thanks in advance guys and here we go


---Tournament Summary---
$3.3 SNG: Finished 3/9, payout unknown
Data for 88 hands.
You played 10 hands (11.36%)
You raised 6 times preflop (6.82%)

The Tournament Trimmer (v2.0) from http://www.FlopTurnRiver.com

-----Hand 1-----
Hero's M = 50.00
PokerStars Game #28443866734: Tournament #165449593, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level I (10/20) - 2009/05/21 5:37:49 ET
Table '165449593 1' 9-max Seat #1 is the button
Seat 1: bluefish2 (1500)
Seat 2: Hero (1500)
Seat 3: Hilbo02 (1500)
Seat 4: jasmine2003 (1500)
Seat 5: guest545 (1500)
Seat 6: Black Crow15 (1500)
Seat 7: Cednificent (1500)
Seat 8: topl�s (1500)
Seat 9: jenny78180 (1500)
Hero: posts small blind 10
Hilbo02: posts big blind 20
Preflop
Dealt to Hero T 9
jasmine2003: folds
guest545: folds
Black Crow15: folds
Cednificent: folds
topl�s: calls 20
jenny78180: folds
bluefish2: calls 20
Hero: calls 10
Hilbo02: checks
Flop: T 4 5
Hero: checks
Hilbo02: checks
topl�s: checks
bluefish2: bets 20
Hero: calls 20
Hilbo02: calls 20
topl�s: calls 20
Turn: 8
Hero: checks
Hilbo02: checks
topl�s: checks
bluefish2: bets 20
Hero: raises 40 to 60
Hilbo02: folds
topl�s: calls 60
bluefish2: calls 40
River: 9
Hero: bets 160
topl�s: calls 160
bluefish2: folds
Showdown
Hero: shows T 9 (two pair, Tens and Nines)
Hero collected 660
topl�s: mucked 9 K

2 K Button (Hero's M = 63.33; f+f+f+f+f+c+F+c+s+s+s+b+c+f+b+c+b+c)
2 T CO (Hero's M = 63.33; r+c+f+f+f+F+f+f+c+s+b+c+f+b+c+b+c)
J Q MP (Hero's M = 63.33; c+c+f+c+F+f+c+f+s+s+s+b+f+f+f+c+s+b+c+s+s)
J 3 MP2 (Hero's M = 63.33; f+f+c+F+f+f+c+c+s+b+f+f+c+b+c+b+c)
T 3 UTG+2 (Hero's M = 63.33; f+f+F+c+f+c+f+f+r+c+c+s+s+s+b+f+f)
6 8 UTG+1 (Hero's M = 63.33; f+F+c+f+f+f+r+c+f+c+s+s+b+f+f)
Q T UTG (Hero's M = 63.33; F+[/color]c+f+f+f+f+f+c+s+s+s+b+f+f)
9 6 BB (Hero's M = 63.33; f+f+f+f+f+f+f+c+S+b+F)
2 Q SB (Hero's M = 62.67; f+f+f+f+f+f+c+F+r+c+s+s+b+c+b+f)
8 A Button (Hero's M = 62.33; c+f+r+f+f+c+F+f+f+c+s+b+f+c+s+b+r+c+b+c)
K 6 CO (Hero's M = 62.33; c+f+r+f+f+F+f+f+f+c+s+b+c+s+b+r+c+b+f)
J A MP (Hero's M = 41.56; f+f+f+f+F+f+r+f+c+s+b+f)
T 9 MP2 (Hero's M = 41.56; f+f+c+F+f+c+f+c+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+s)
9 8 UTG+2 (Hero's M = 41.56; f+f+F+f+c+f+f+f+s+b+c+b+c+s+b+f)
8 T UTG+1 (Hero's M = 41.56; f+F+r+f+f+f+f+f+f)
T 8 UTG (Hero's M = 41.56; F+[/color]c+c+c+c+f+f+c+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+b+r+f+f+f+f+c+s+s)
3 8 BB (Hero's M = 41.56; f+f+f+c+f+r+f+f+F+f)
5 7 SB (Hero's M = 40.89; f+f+c+f+c+f+f+F+s+s+b+f+f)
9 7 Button (Hero's M = 40.56; f+c+f+c+c+f+F+c+s+s+b+c+c+c+f+b+c+r+f+f+f)
7 8 CO (Hero's M = 40.56; c+f+c+f+c+F+f+c+s+b+c+c+r+f+r+c+c+s+s+s+b+f)
3 5 MP (Hero's M = 40.56; f+f+f+f+F+f+c+f+s+b+f)
A 2 MP2 (Hero's M = 40.56; f+f+c+F+f+c+f+c+s+b+f+c+f)
6 Q UTG+1 (Hero's M = 40.56; c+F+r+f+f+f+f+f+c+s+b+f)
A 2 UTG (Hero's M = 24.33; F+f+[/color]c+f+c+f+c+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+s)
K Q BB (Hero's M = 24.33; r+f+f+f+f+f+f+F)
3 7 SB (Hero's M = 23.67; f+f+r+f+f+f+F+f)
7 3 Button (Hero's M = 23.33; f+f+f+f+c+F+c+s+s+s+b+f+f)
Q 5 CO (Hero's M = 23.33; f+c+f+f+F+f+r+c+c+b+c+c+s+s+b+f+c+b+c)
T A MP (Hero's M = 23.33; f+f+F+f+f+f)
K 7 UTG+1 (Hero's M = 23.33; f+F+f+c+c+r+f+f+c+s+s+s+b+r+c+s+b+c)
J 7 UTG (Hero's M = 23.33; F+f+f+[/color]c+f+c+s+b+f+f)

-----Hand 2-----
Hero's M = 23.33
PokerStars Game #28444288091: Tournament #165449593, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level III (25/50) - 2009/05/21 6:03:28 ET
Table '165449593 1' 9-max Seat #9 is the button
Seat 1: bluefish2 (1640)
Seat 2: Hero (1750)
Seat 3: Hilbo02 (1345)
Seat 4: jasmine2003 (2755)
Seat 7: Cednificent (2165)
Seat 8: topl�s (2535)
Seat 9: jenny78180 (1310)
bluefish2: posts small blind 25
Hero: posts big blind 50
Preflop
Dealt to Hero Q 8
Hilbo02: folds
jasmine2003: folds
Cednificent: folds
topl�s: calls 50
jenny78180: folds
bluefish2: calls 25
Hero: checks
Flop: 8 6 2
bluefish2: checks
Hero: checks
topl�s: bets 100
bluefish2: folds
Hero: calls 100
Turn: 2
Hero: checks
topl�s: checks
River: Q
Hero: bets 150
topl�s: calls 150
Showdown
Hero: shows Q 8 (two pair, Queens and Eights)
Hero collected 650
topl�s: mucked 9 K

-----Hand 3-----
Hero's M = 28.00
PokerStars Game #28444302303: Tournament #165449593, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level III (25/50) - 2009/05/21 6:04:17 ET
Table '165449593 1' 9-max Seat #1 is the button
Seat 1: bluefish2 (1590)
Seat 2: Hero (2100)
Seat 3: Hilbo02 (1345)
Seat 4: jasmine2003 (2755)
Seat 7: Cednificent (2165)
Seat 8: topl�s (2235)
Seat 9: jenny78180 (1310)
Hero: posts small blind 25
Hilbo02: posts big blind 50
Preflop
Dealt to Hero A 9
jasmine2003: folds
Cednificent: folds
topl�s: folds
jenny78180: folds
bluefish2: folds
Hero: calls 25
Hilbo02: checks
Flop: 7 J A
Hero: checks
Hilbo02: bets 100
Hero: calls 100
Turn: 6
Hero: checks
Hilbo02: checks
River: T
Hero: bets 150
Hilbo02: folds
Uncalled bet (150) returned to Hero
Hero collected 300

Q 7 Button (Hero's M = 30.00; f+f+f+f+F+f)
A Q CO (Hero's M = 30.00; c+r+f+F+f+f+f+c+s+b+c+b+f)
K 3 MP (Hero's M = 30.00; f+f+F+f+f+f)
9 A UTG+1 (Hero's M = 30.00; f+F+f+f+f+c+s+b+f)
8 A UTG (Hero's M = 30.00; F+f+f+f+f+[/color]c+s+s+b+f)
K 7 BB (Hero's M = 30.00; r+f+f+f+f+f+F)

-----Hand 4-----
Hero's M = 29.33
PokerStars Game #28444356218: Tournament #165449593, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level III (25/50) - 2009/05/21 6:07:24 ET
Table '165449593 1' 9-max Seat #1 is the button
Seat 1: bluefish2 (1615)
Seat 2: Hero (2200)
Seat 3: Hilbo02 (1245)
Seat 4: jasmine2003 (2755)
Seat 7: Cednificent (2090)
Seat 8: topl�s (2735)
Seat 9: jenny78180 (860)
Hero: posts small blind 25
Hilbo02: posts big blind 50
Preflop
Dealt to Hero 9 Q
jasmine2003: folds
Cednificent: folds
topl�s: folds
jenny78180: folds
bluefish2: folds
Hero: calls 25
Hilbo02: checks
Flop: 4 7 6
Hero: checks
Hilbo02: checks
Turn: 5
Hero: checks
Hilbo02: bets 50
Hero: calls 50
River: 7
Hero: checks
Hilbo02: bets 100
Hero: folds
Uncalled bet (100) returned to Hilbo02
Hilbo02 collected 200

7 K Button (Hero's M = 14.00; c+f+f+f+F+f+s+s+b+f)
6 3 CO (Hero's M = 14.00; r+f+f+F+f+f+f)
3 4 MP (Hero's M = 14.00; r+f+F+f+f+f+r+r+c)
K 3 UTG (Hero's M = 14.00; F+f+f+[/color]c+r+f+c+b+f)
J A BB (Hero's M = 14.00; f+f+f+f+f)
J 7 SB (Hero's M = 14.33; r+f+f+f+F+f)
7 3 Button (Hero's M = 14.00; r+f+c+F+f+f+b+c)
6 K CO (Hero's M = 14.00; f+f+F+f+c+s+s+s+b+f)
8 Q MP (Hero's M = 14.00; c+F+f+f+f+r+c+b+c+s+b+c+b+c)
3 4 UTG (Hero's M = 14.00; F+f+f+[/color]r+c+c+s+s+s+b+c+s+b+f)

-----Hand 5-----
Hero's M = 14.00
PokerStars Game #28444456594: Tournament #165449593, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level IV (50/100) - 2009/05/21 6:13:14 ET
Table '165449593 1' 9-max Seat #8 is the button
Seat 1: bluefish2 (2330)
Seat 2: Hero (2100)
Seat 3: Hilbo02 (1145)
Seat 4: jasmine2003 (2755)
Seat 8: topl�s (5170)
bluefish2: posts small blind 50
Hero: posts big blind 100
Preflop
Dealt to Hero A Q
Hilbo02: folds
jasmine2003: raises 100 to 200
topl�s: folds
bluefish2: folds
Hero: calls 100
Flop: 8 5 6
Hero: checks
jasmine2003: bets 200
Hero: folds
Uncalled bet (200) returned to jasmine2003
jasmine2003 collected 450
jasmine2003: shows T T (a pair of Tens)

7 3 SB (Hero's M = 12.67; f+f+c+F+r+f)
J 2 Button (Hero's M = 12.33; r+f+F+c+f+s+b+c+s+s+s+b+c)

-----Hand 6-----
Hero's M = 12.33
PokerStars Game #28444481309: Tournament #165449593, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level IV (50/100) - 2009/05/21 6:14:41 ET
Table '165449593 1' 9-max Seat #3 is the button
Seat 1: bluefish2 (2180)
Seat 2: Hero (1850)
Seat 3: Hilbo02 (2195)
Seat 4: jasmine2003 (2905)
Seat 8: topl�s (4370)
jasmine2003: posts small blind 50
topl�s: posts big blind 100
Preflop
Dealt to Hero A K
bluefish2: folds
Hero: raises 200 to 300
Hilbo02: folds
jasmine2003: folds
topl�s: folds
Uncalled bet (200) returned to Hero
Hero collected 250

A T UTG (Hero's M = 13.33; F+f+[/color]c+f+s+b+r+c+b+r+c+b+r+c)
7 K BB (Hero's M = 13.33; f+c+f+f+S+S+s+S+b+F)
4 6 SB (Hero's M = 12.67; f+f+f+F)
T K Button (Hero's M = 12.33; r+f+F+f+f)
7 T CO (Hero's M = 12.33; f+F+f+f)
8 Q UTG (Hero's M = 12.33; F+f+f+[/color]c+s+s+b+f)
4 9 BB (Hero's M = 12.33; f+f+f+r+F)
J 4 SB (Hero's M = 7.78; f+f+f+F)
8 9 Button (Hero's M = 7.44; c+f+F+c+s+s+s+b+f+c+s+b+r+c+b+c)
7 T CO (Hero's M = 7.44; f+F+f+f)
5 8 UTG (Hero's M = 7.44; F+f+f+[/color]r+c+b+c+b+c+b+c)
J 9 BB (Hero's M = 7.44; f+f+f+f)
A 2 SB (Hero's M = 7.78; f+c+f+F+s+b+r+c+s+s+b+c)
8 6 Button (Hero's M = 7.44; f+f+F+f)

-----Hand 7-----
Hero's M = 7.44
PokerStars Game #28444600054: Tournament #165449593, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level V (75/150) - 2009/05/21 6:21:34 ET
Table '165449593 1' 9-max Seat #3 is the button
Seat 1: bluefish2 (1585)
Seat 2: Hero (1675)
Seat 3: Hilbo02 (1295)
Seat 4: jasmine2003 (5905)
Seat 8: topl�s (3040)
jasmine2003: posts small blind 75
topl�s: posts big blind 150
Preflop
Dealt to Hero Q K
bluefish2: folds
Hero: raises 175 to 325
Hilbo02: folds
jasmine2003: folds
topl�s: folds
Uncalled bet (175) returned to Hero
Hero collected 375

9 Q UTG (Hero's M = 8.44; F+f+f+[/color]c+s+s+s+s+s+b+c)
3 J BB (Hero's M = 8.44; f+c+c+f+S+S+b+c+F+s+s+b+c)
4 8 SB (Hero's M = 7.78; f+f+c+F+s+b+c+b+c)
6 A Button (Hero's M = 7.44; r+f+F+f+f)
K 4 CO (Hero's M = 7.44; r+F+f+f+c)
3 A BB (Hero's M = 7.44; f+r+c+F+s+b+c+s+b+c+s+b+c)

-----Hand 8-----
Hero's M = 6.78
PokerStars Game #28444655348: Tournament #165449593, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level V (75/150) - 2009/05/21 6:24:50 ET
Table '165449593 1' 9-max Seat #8 is the button
Seat 2: Hero (1525)
Seat 3: Hilbo02 (2590)
Seat 4: jasmine2003 (8530)
Seat 8: topl�s (855)
Hero: posts small blind 75
Hilbo02: posts big blind 150
Preflop
Dealt to Hero 8 K
jasmine2003: folds
topl�s: folds
Hero: raises 1375 to 1525 and is all-in
Hilbo02: folds
Uncalled bet (1375) returned to Hero
Hero collected 300

A 5 Button (Hero's M = 7.44; f+F+c+s+s+b+f)
8 Q CO (Hero's M = 7.44; F+f+[/color]c+s+s+s+b+c+s+s)
K 7 BB (Hero's M = 7.44; r+f+f+F)
2 4 SB (Hero's M = 6.78; r+f+F+f)
T 9 Button (Hero's M = 6.44; f+F+f)
9 5 CO (Hero's M = 6.44; F+f+[/color]r+r+c)
Q 2 SB (Hero's M = 6.44; f+F)
5 3 Button (Hero's M = 6.11; F+[/color]c+s+s+s+s+s+b+f)
9 J CO (Hero's M = 4.58; f+f)

-----Hand 9-----
Hero's M = 4.92
PokerStars Game #28444715254: Tournament #165449593, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level VI (100/200) - 2009/05/21 6:28:20 ET
Table '165449593 1' 9-max Seat #4 is the button
Seat 2: Hero (1475)
Seat 3: Hilbo02 (2515)
Seat 4: jasmine2003 (9510)
Hero: posts small blind 100
Hilbo02: posts big blind 200
Preflop
Dealt to Hero 4 6
jasmine2003: folds
Hero: raises 1275 to 1475 and is all-in
Hilbo02: folds
Uncalled bet (1275) returned to Hero
Hero collected 400

-----Hand 10-----
Hero's M = 5.58
PokerStars Game #28444720147: Tournament #165449593, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level VI (100/200) - 2009/05/21 6:28:36 ET
Table '165449593 1' 9-max Seat #2 is the button
Seat 2: Hero (1675)
Seat 3: Hilbo02 (2315)
Seat 4: jasmine2003 (9510)
Hilbo02: posts small blind 100
jasmine2003: posts big blind 200
Preflop
Dealt to Hero K J
Hero: raises 1475 to 1675 and is all-in
Hilbo02: raises 640 to 2315 and is all-in
jasmine2003: folds
Uncalled bet (640) returned to Hilbo02
Flop: 2 2 J
Turn: Q
River: T
Showdown
Hilbo02: shows T A (a flush, Ace high)
Hero: shows K J (two pair, Jacks and Deuces)
Hilbo02 collected 3550

and here is the second SNG


---Tournament Summary---
$3.3 SNG: Finished 3/9, payout unknown
Data for 112 hands.
You played 14 hands (12.50%)
You raised 9 times preflop (8.04%)

The Tournament Trimmer (v2.0) from http://www.FlopTurnRiver.com

9 2 UTG (Hero's M = 50.00; F+[/color]c+f+f+c+c+c+c+s+s+s+s+s+b+f+f+f+f+c+s+b+f)
Q 3 BB (Hero's M = 50.00; f+f+f+c+f+r+c+f+F+c+s+s+s+s+s+s+s+b+c+f)
Q 6 SB (Hero's M = 49.33; f+f+f+f+f+c+f+F+s+b+f)
A 6 Button (Hero's M = 49.00; f+c+f+f+f+f+F+c+r+f+c+s+b+f)
9 T CO (Hero's M = 49.00; f+f+f+f+f+F+f+f)
A 2 MP (Hero's M = 49.00; f+r+f+f+F+c+f+c+f+s+b+f+f)
Q 2 MP2 (Hero's M = 49.00; r+f+f+F+c+c+f+c+f+s+s+b+f+f+f)
T 8 UTG+2 (Hero's M = 49.00; f+f+F+r+c+f+f+f+f+s+s+b+f)
T 9 UTG+1 (Hero's M = 49.00; f+F+f+f+f+c+f+f+s+b+f)
7 6 UTG (Hero's M = 49.00; F+[/color]c+f+f+f+f+r+f+f+c+s+b+r+c+b+f)
6 9 BB (Hero's M = 49.00; c+r+f+f+f+f+f+f+F+c+s+b+f)

-----Hand 1-----
Hero's M = 48.33
PokerStars Game #28444030578: Tournament #165449633, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level I (10/20) - 2009/05/21 5:47:57 ET
Table '165449633 1' 9-max Seat #3 is the button
Seat 1: Vinccool (1230)
Seat 2: 95lbofterror (1670)
Seat 3: jenny78180 (1440)
Seat 4: Hero (1450)
Seat 5: monyooo (1850)
Seat 6: Toinou38F38 (1540)
Seat 7: 8_-BARKZ-_8 (1450)
Seat 8: home4ag (1220)
Seat 9: Hilbo02 (1650)
Hero: posts small blind 10
monyooo: posts big blind 20
Preflop
Dealt to Hero Q A
Toinou38F38: folds
8_-BARKZ-_8: folds
home4ag: folds
Hilbo02: folds
Vinccool: folds
95lbofterror: folds
jenny78180: folds
Hero: raises 80 to 100
monyooo: folds
Uncalled bet (80) returned to Hero
Hero collected 40

3 7 Button (Hero's M = 32.67; f+c+f+c+f+f+F+f+s+s+s+s+b+c+c+b+f+f)
T 6 CO (Hero's M = 32.67; f+r+f+f+f+F+f+f+f)
4 T MP (Hero's M = 32.67; f+r+f+f+F+r+f+f+f+c+b+r+r+c)
A 9 MP2 (Hero's M = 32.67; f+f+F+c+f+r+f+f+f)

-----Hand 2-----
Hero's M = 32.67
PokerStars Game #28444088047: Tournament #165449633, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level II (15/30) - 2009/05/21 5:51:27 ET
Table '165449633 1' 9-max Seat #8 is the button
Seat 2: 95lbofterror (1670)
Seat 3: jenny78180 (1440)
Seat 4: Hero (1470)
Seat 5: monyooo (2980)
Seat 6: Toinou38F38 (1700)
Seat 7: 8_-BARKZ-_8 (1480)
Seat 8: home4ag (1095)
Seat 9: Hilbo02 (1665)
Hilbo02: posts small blind 15
95lbofterror: posts big blind 30
Preflop
Dealt to Hero 8 8
jenny78180: folds
Hero: calls 30
monyooo: folds
Toinou38F38: folds
8_-BARKZ-_8: folds
home4ag: calls 30
Hilbo02: folds
95lbofterror: checks
Flop: 5 7 K
95lbofterror: checks
Hero: checks
home4ag: checks
Turn: T
95lbofterror: checks
Hero: checks
home4ag: checks
River: A
95lbofterror: checks
Hero: checks
home4ag: checks
Showdown
95lbofterror: shows 5 8 (a pair of Fives)
Hero: shows 8 8 (a pair of Eights)
Hero collected 105
home4ag (button): mucked J 6

2 2 UTG (Hero's M = 34.33; F+f+f+f+[/color]c+f+f+s+b+c+b+c+b+r+c)
2 A BB (Hero's M = 34.33; c+f+f+f+f+f+f+S+S+b+F)
9 2 SB (Hero's M = 33.67; f+c+c+f+f+f+F+s+s+b+f+f)
6 7 Button (Hero's M = 33.33; f+f+f+f+f+F+c+s+s+b+r+f)
2 3 CO (Hero's M = 33.33; c+r+f+f+F+f+f+c+c+s+b+r+f+f)
7 Q MP (Hero's M = 33.33; f+f+f+F+f+r+f+c+s+b+f)
8 4 MP2 (Hero's M = 33.33; f+f+F+r+f+f+c+f+b+r+c)
T 5 UTG (Hero's M = 33.33; F+f+f+f+f+[/color]c+r+c+s+s+s+s+s+s)
3 7 BB (Hero's M = 20.00; f+f+r+f+f+f+F)
6 K SB (Hero's M = 19.33; f+f+f+f+f+F)
6 2 Button (Hero's M = 19.00; f+c+c+f+F+c+s+s+s+s+b+f+f+f)
7 9 CO (Hero's M = 19.00; c+f+f+F+f+r+f+f)
7 J MP (Hero's M = 19.00; f+f+F+f+f+f)
6 3 UTG+1 (Hero's M = 19.00; f+F+f+f+f+c+s+s+s+s+s+s+s)
7 4 UTG (Hero's M = 19.00; F+[/color]r+f+f+f+f+f)

-----Hand 3-----
Hero's M = 19.00
PokerStars Game #28444263403: Tournament #165449633, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level III (25/50) - 2009/05/21 6:02:01 ET
Table '165449633 1' 9-max Seat #2 is the button
Seat 2: 95lbofterror (1580)
Seat 3: jenny78180 (1478)
Seat 4: Hero (1425)
Seat 5: monyooo (3907)
Seat 6: Toinou38F38 (1750)
Seat 7: 8_-BARKZ-_8 (1420)
Seat 9: Hilbo02 (1940)
jenny78180: posts small blind 25
Hero: posts big blind 50
Preflop
Dealt to Hero 9 T
monyooo: folds
Toinou38F38: folds
8_-BARKZ-_8: folds
Hilbo02: folds
95lbofterror: calls 50
jenny78180: calls 25
Hero: checks
Flop: 6 8 J
jenny78180: checks
Hero: checks
95lbofterror: checks
Turn: 9
jenny78180: checks
Hero: bets 100
95lbofterror: raises 100 to 200
jenny78180: folds
Hero: folds
Uncalled bet (100) returned to 95lbofterror
95lbofterror collected 350

9 5 SB (Hero's M = 17.00; f+f+f+f+f+F)
2 Q Button (Hero's M = 16.67; f+f+f+f+F+c+r+f)
7 9 CO (Hero's M = 16.67; f+f+f+F+c+r+f+r+f)

-----Hand 4-----
Hero's M = 16.67
PokerStars Game #28444309560: Tournament #165449633, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level III (25/50) - 2009/05/21 6:04:42 ET
Table '165449633 1' 9-max Seat #6 is the button
Seat 2: 95lbofterror (1780)
Seat 3: jenny78180 (1428)
Seat 4: Hero (1250)
Seat 5: monyooo (4057)
Seat 6: Toinou38F38 (1675)
Seat 7: 8_-BARKZ-_8 (1370)
Seat 9: Hilbo02 (1940)
8_-BARKZ-_8: posts small blind 25
Hilbo02: posts big blind 50
Preflop
Dealt to Hero A K
95lbofterror: folds
jenny78180: folds
Hero: raises 100 to 150
monyooo: folds
Toinou38F38: folds
8_-BARKZ-_8: folds
Hilbo02: folds
Uncalled bet (100) returned to Hero
Hero collected 125

5 3 UTG+1 (Hero's M = 17.67; f+F+f+f+f+c+s+s+b+f)
7 7 UTG (Hero's M = 17.67; F+[/color]c+r+f+f+f+f+f)
T 2 BB (Hero's M = 17.67; f+f+f+r+f+f+F)

-----Hand 5-----
Hero's M = 17.00
PokerStars Game #28444335348: Tournament #165449633, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level III (25/50) - 2009/05/21 6:06:12 ET
Table '165449633 1' 9-max Seat #3 is the button
Seat 2: 95lbofterror (1805)
Seat 3: jenny78180 (1353)
Seat 4: Hero (1275)
Seat 5: monyooo (4007)
Seat 6: Toinou38F38 (1800)
Seat 7: 8_-BARKZ-_8 (1345)
Seat 9: Hilbo02 (1915)
Hero: posts small blind 25
monyooo: posts big blind 50
Preflop
Dealt to Hero J A
Toinou38F38: folds
8_-BARKZ-_8: folds
Hilbo02: folds
95lbofterror: calls 50
jenny78180: folds
Hero: calls 25
monyooo: checks
Flop: 9 6 4
Hero: checks
monyooo: bets 50
95lbofterror: folds
Hero: folds
Uncalled bet (50) returned to monyooo
monyooo collected 150

7 6 Button (Hero's M = 16.33; f+f+c+c+F+c+s+s+s+s+s+b+f+c+f+s+b+f)
9 Q CO (Hero's M = 16.33; f+f+f+F+r+f+f)
4 J MP (Hero's M = 16.33; f+f+F+f+f+r+f)
K 9 UTG+1 (Hero's M = 8.17; f+F+c+f+f+f+s+s+b+f)
J 7 UTG (Hero's M = 8.17; F+[/color]r+f+f+f+f+f)
4 8 BB (Hero's M = 8.17; f+f+f+f+c+f+S+S+s+S+s+S+s)
8 4 SB (Hero's M = 7.50; f+f+f+f+f+F)
2 7 Button (Hero's M = 7.17; f+f+f+f+F+c+s+s+s+s+s+s+s)

-----Hand 6-----
Hero's M = 7.17
PokerStars Game #28444409390: Tournament #165449633, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level IV (50/100) - 2009/05/21 6:10:30 ET
Table '165449633 1' 9-max Seat #5 is the button
Seat 2: 95lbofterror (1955)
Seat 3: jenny78180 (1153)
Seat 4: Hero (1075)
Seat 5: monyooo (4532)
Seat 6: Toinou38F38 (1625)
Seat 7: 8_-BARKZ-_8 (1345)
Seat 9: Hilbo02 (1815)
Toinou38F38: posts small blind 50
8_-BARKZ-_8: posts big blind 100
Preflop
Dealt to Hero A A
Hilbo02: folds
95lbofterror: calls 100
jenny78180: folds
Hero: raises 250 to 350
monyooo: folds
Toinou38F38: folds
8_-BARKZ-_8: folds
95lbofterror: calls 250
Flop: 8 4 5
95lbofterror: checks
Hero: bets 420
95lbofterror: folds
Uncalled bet (420) returned to Hero
Hero collected 850

8 8 MP (Hero's M = 10.50; f+f+F+f+f+r+f)
3 J UTG+1 (Hero's M = 10.50; f+F+f+f+r+f+f)
A 4 UTG (Hero's M = 10.50; F+[/color]c+f+f+f+c+s+s+s+b+c+f+s+s+s+b+f)

-----Hand 7-----
Hero's M = 10.50
PokerStars Game #28444442107: Tournament #165449633, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level IV (50/100) - 2009/05/21 6:12:24 ET
Table '165449633 1' 9-max Seat #2 is the button
Seat 2: 95lbofterror (1305)
Seat 3: jenny78180 (1053)
Seat 4: Hero (1575)
Seat 5: monyooo (4832)
Seat 6: Toinou38F38 (1575)
Seat 7: 8_-BARKZ-_8 (1495)
Seat 9: Hilbo02 (1665)
jenny78180: posts small blind 50
Hero: posts big blind 100
Preflop
Dealt to Hero A 6
monyooo: folds
Toinou38F38: folds
8_-BARKZ-_8: folds
Hilbo02: folds
95lbofterror: folds
jenny78180: calls 50
Hero: checks
Flop: 9 5 2
jenny78180: checks
Hero: checks
Turn: 6
jenny78180: checks
Hero: bets 100
jenny78180: folds
Uncalled bet (100) returned to Hero
Hero collected 200

Q 7 SB (Hero's M = 11.17; f+f+f+f+r+F+f)
6 7 Button (Hero's M = 10.83; f+r+f+f+F+c+f+s+b+f)

-----Hand 8-----
Hero's M = 10.83
PokerStars Game #28444465688: Tournament #165449633, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level IV (50/100) - 2009/05/21 6:13:47 ET
Table '165449633 1' 9-max Seat #5 is the button
Seat 2: 95lbofterror (1305)
Seat 3: jenny78180 (1103)
Seat 4: Hero (1625)
Seat 5: monyooo (4482)
Seat 6: Toinou38F38 (1475)
Seat 7: 8_-BARKZ-_8 (1495)
Seat 9: Hilbo02 (2015)
Toinou38F38: posts small blind 50
8_-BARKZ-_8: posts big blind 100
Preflop
Dealt to Hero T T
Hilbo02: folds
95lbofterror: calls 100
jenny78180: folds
Hero: raises 200 to 300
monyooo: raises 4182 to 4482 and is all-in
Toinou38F38: folds
8_-BARKZ-_8: folds
95lbofterror: calls 1205 and is all-in
Hero: folds
Uncalled bet (3177) returned to monyooo
Flop: 7 J 9
Turn: 7
River: 5
Showdown
95lbofterror: shows Q K (a pair of Sevens)
monyooo: shows 9 A (two pair, Nines and Sevens)
monyooo collected 3060

2 5 MP (Hero's M = 8.83; f+F+r+f+f+f)
9 K UTG (Hero's M = 8.83; F+[/color]r+f+f+f+f)
J A BB (Hero's M = 8.83; f+f+r+f+f+F)
2 9 SB (Hero's M = 8.17; f+f+r+r+F+f+c)
8 7 Button (Hero's M = 7.83; f+f+f+F+r+c+b+f)
7 3 CO (Hero's M = 7.83; f+f+F+f+r+f)
2 9 MP (Hero's M = 7.83; f+F+r+f+f+f)
7 4 UTG (Hero's M = 7.83; F+[/color]r+f+f+f+c+b+f)
J 6 BB (Hero's M = 7.83; f+f+f+r+f+F)

-----Hand 9-----
Hero's M = 7.17
PokerStars Game #28444530256: Tournament #165449633, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level IV (50/100) - 2009/05/21 6:17:32 ET
Table '165449633 1' 9-max Seat #3 is the button
Seat 3: jenny78180 (2256)
Seat 4: Hero (1075)
Seat 5: monyooo (6587)
Seat 6: Toinou38F38 (1325)
Seat 7: 8_-BARKZ-_8 (1345)
Seat 9: Hilbo02 (912)
Hero: posts small blind 50
monyooo: posts big blind 100
Preflop
Dealt to Hero K Q
Toinou38F38: folds
8_-BARKZ-_8: folds
Hilbo02: folds
jenny78180: folds
Hero: raises 975 to 1075 and is all-in
monyooo: calls 975
Flop: 7 Q A
Turn: 4
River: 2
Showdown
Hero: shows K Q (a pair of Queens)
monyooo: shows 5 K (high card Ace)
Hero collected 2150

4 A Button (Hero's M = 14.33; f+f+f+F+r+r+c)
Q T CO (Hero's M = 9.56; f+f+F+r+f+f)
5 T MP (Hero's M = 9.56; f+F+r+f+f+f)
5 J UTG (Hero's M = 9.56; F+[/color]r+f+f+f+f)
J 3 BB (Hero's M = 9.56; f+f+f+f+f)
T J SB (Hero's M = 9.89; f+f+r+f+F+f)
5 7 Button (Hero's M = 9.56; f+f+f+F+c+s+b+f)
5 T CO (Hero's M = 9.56; f+f+F+c+r+f+f)
9 K MP (Hero's M = 9.56; f+F+r+f+f+f)
3 Q UTG (Hero's M = 9.56; F+f+f+[/color]r+c+f)
3 3 BB (Hero's M = 9.56; c+r+f+f+f+F+c)
3 4 SB (Hero's M = 8.89; c+f+c+F+s+s+s+s+s+b+c)
6 K Button (Hero's M = 8.56; f+F+f)
9 T CO (Hero's M = 8.56; F+f+[/color]c+s+s+b+f)
6 Q BB (Hero's M = 8.56; r+f+f+F)
4 9 SB (Hero's M = 7.89; r+f+F+f)
6 2 Button (Hero's M = 7.56; r+F+f+f)
2 6 CO (Hero's M = 7.56; F+[/color]c+f+s+s+b+f)
4 K BB (Hero's M = 7.56; f+f+f)
T 6 SB (Hero's M = 7.89; f+f+F)
8 5 Button (Hero's M = 7.56; f+F+r+f)
7 7 CO (Hero's M = 7.56; F+f+[/color]c+s+s+s+b+f)
8 3 BB (Hero's M = 7.56; r+f+c+F+b+c)
5 6 Button (Hero's M = 6.89; F+[/color]r+f)
7 Q CO (Hero's M = 6.89; r+f+F)
T 2 SB (Hero's M = 6.22; f+F)
2 9 Button (Hero's M = 5.89; F+[/color]r+f)
Q 8 CO (Hero's M = 5.89; r+f+F)
J 6 SB (Hero's M = 5.22; f+F)
7 5 Button (Hero's M = 4.89; F+f[/color])

-----Hand 10-----
Hero's M = 4.89
PokerStars Game #28444679080: Tournament #165449633, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level V (75/150) - 2009/05/21 6:26:13 ET
Table '165449633 1' 9-max Seat #5 is the button
Seat 4: Hero (1100)
Seat 5: monyooo (11176)
Seat 9: Hilbo02 (1224)
Hilbo02: posts small blind 75
Hero: posts big blind 150
Preflop
Dealt to Hero A A
monyooo: folds
Hilbo02: raises 1074 to 1224 and is all-in
Hero: calls 950 and is all-in
Uncalled bet (124) returned to Hilbo02
Flop: 6 4 Q
Turn: 4
River: T
Showdown
Hilbo02: shows K Q (two pair, Queens and Fours)
Hero: shows A A (two pair, Aces and Fours)
Hero collected 2200

A 4 SB (Hero's M = 9.78; f+F)
6 3 Button (Hero's M = 10.68; F+[/color]c)
4 A CO (Hero's M = 9.44; r+c+F)
3 A SB (Hero's M = 8.78; f+F)

-----Hand 11-----
Hero's M = 8.44
PokerStars Game #28444705052: Tournament #165449633, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level V (75/150) - 2009/05/21 6:27:44 ET
Table '165449633 1' 9-max Seat #4 is the button
Seat 4: Hero (1900)
Seat 5: monyooo (10954)
Seat 9: Hilbo02 (646)
monyooo: posts small blind 75
Hilbo02: posts big blind 150
Preflop
Dealt to Hero K K
Hero: raises 450 to 600
monyooo: folds
Hilbo02: raises 46 to 646 and is all-in
Hero: calls 46
Flop: A J 9
Turn: 7
River: 4
Showdown
Hilbo02: shows A 4 (two pair, Aces and Fours)
Hero: shows K K (a pair of Kings)
Hilbo02 collected 1367

8 Q CO (Hero's M = 4.18; r+f+F)
Q 2 SB (Hero's M = 3.51; r+F+f)
J 4 Button (Hero's M = 3.18; F+[/color]r+f)

-----Hand 12-----
Hero's M = 3.18
PokerStars Game #28444725934: Tournament #165449633, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level VI (100/200) - 2009/05/21 6:28:56 ET
Table '165449633 1' 9-max Seat #5 is the button
Seat 4: Hero (954)
Seat 5: monyooo (11179)
Seat 9: Hilbo02 (1367)
Hilbo02: posts small blind 100
Hero: posts big blind 200
Preflop
Dealt to Hero K Q
monyooo: folds
Hilbo02: calls 100
Hero: raises 754 to 954 and is all-in
Hilbo02: folds
Uncalled bet (754) returned to Hero
Hero collected 400

8 2 SB (Hero's M = 3.85; f+F)
8 J Button (Hero's M = 3.51; F+[/color]r+f)
6 8 CO (Hero's M = 3.51; f+c+S+s+S+b+F)

-----Hand 13-----
Hero's M = 2.85
PokerStars Game #28444745934: Tournament #165449633, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level VI (100/200) - 2009/05/21 6:30:03 ET
Table '165449633 1' 9-max Seat #9 is the button
Seat 4: Hero (854)
Seat 5: monyooo (11479)
Seat 9: Hilbo02 (1167)
Hero: posts small blind 100
monyooo: posts big blind 200
Preflop
Dealt to Hero K T
Hilbo02: folds
Hero: raises 654 to 854 and is all-in
monyooo: folds
Uncalled bet (654) returned to Hero
Hero collected 400

-----Hand 14-----
Hero's M = 3.51
PokerStars Game #28444749828: Tournament #165449633, $3.00+$0.40 Hold'em No Limit - Level VI (100/200) - 2009/05/21 6:30:17 ET
Table '165449633 1' 9-max Seat #4 is the button
Seat 4: Hero (1054)
Seat 5: monyooo (11279)
Seat 9: Hilbo02 (1167)
monyooo: posts small blind 100
Hilbo02: posts big blind 200
Preflop
Dealt to Hero K A
Hero: raises 854 to 1054 and is all-in
monyooo: calls 954
Hilbo02: folds
Flop: 7 6 T
Turn: 2
River: 3
Showdown
monyooo: shows T A (a pair of Tens)
Hero: shows K A (high card Ace)
monyooo collected 2308

I am reviewing #1 right now and will have comments up shortly.

Hand 1 - Pre-flop is ok, but with 4 people in the pot I would have donk bet the flop instead of check calling. What would your plan have been if an overcard to your T hit the turn?

As played definitely lead out on the turn. The pot is now up to 180 (if I added correctly) and is big enough to take it down. I would have led out with a bet around 120. Also, your raise is totally worthless. What hand is folding to that weak raise? What would you have done if he had 3bet your weak raise?

MP Hero's M = 41.56 - If the table hasn't been too crazy I may have raised here.

Button
CO
Depending on the blind size and with that many limpers I may either limp behind here or may raise to take the dead money in the pot. I also don't mind the fold though if you are uncomfortable playing these sort of hands post flop.

Hand 2 - by now I hope that you have noticed that villain here is a calling station and therefore should have led out on the flop, turn and river.

Hand 3 - Raise pre-flop and DEFINITELY bet flop on this wet board

CO I am definitely calling here and my 3bet if I thought I could get villain off of a mid pp

Hand 4 - Raise pre-flop

Button - Raise here to steal blinds plus early limper

CO - Raise to steal blinds

Button (after hand 6) Raise pre-flop to steal blinds and early limper

Button - raise to steal blinds

(after hand 8)
Button
Button
CO
- shove may be +ev with these hands

In general you are WAAAAAYYYY too passive in your betting. You need to take control of hands more, raise more pre-flop when you do play hands and steal the blinds more when they get big.

thank you a lot GatorJH for taking the time to review and comment

I had a feeling that I play too passive but still am kinda shocked how many spots I missed.

also I see now how just calling behind on a flop with like 10 high and i paired it is kinda bad because of possible overcards to come.

for general play in micro stakes I tend to not cbet a lot anymore, especially with more then one villain in the pot. then again my all around postflop play needs to improve.

any suggestions on how to improve my postflop play?

last point is I tighten up my shoving range in microstakes since I see (and read on dc) its better since you get called more lightly, even more so with loose big stacks.

so your advice would be to become more aggressiv and improve my bet-sizing and steal more blinds even when the pot has been opend with a limper?

thx again for your feedback

Hi,
I just quicky skimmed through your first game there and it would not be fair to comment specifically without taking more time on it.. BUT.. yes.. you do play too passively (as you're well aware of).

Question, "how to improve upon post-flop play"
I'd highly recommend picking up Collin Moshman's book SNG Strategy. It's the kind of book you'll keep around for awhile, picking it up to review stuff from time to time and perhaps be reading it cover-to-cover a bunch of times (I have and am sure I'll be reading it some more still).
I asked around about it prior to purchasing it and heard a variety of comments about it, some saying, "nothing new in there".. others were much more positive. Sure... there might be 'nothing new' to many but still I feel this book would give you a great foundation to work from. Well worth the purchase price and will pay for itself ina couple of sessions if not sooner.