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 Originally Posted by boost
Ya, I mean, I pretty much agree with what you've said.. but come on, the dialog has been pretty choppy at times. It feels like they take the effort to use antiquated sentence structures here and there... but completely ignore this trend they have set for entire scenes.
That is true. It has definitely got a breed of choppiness to it. Thing is, I'm not sure how much of a problem that is. It is possible to pull off a sort of mincing of prose styles. They're not doing it perfectly, but also not horribly.
I'm an insane dialogue hawk, but there's only so much I can say about this show's dialogue because the torrents I'm getting dont have CC so I'm missing about 1/3rd of the words. One thing I do know for sure is that the dialogue is 100x better than Battlestar Galactica. It's also better than the original Star Wars which didn't kill that trilogy
Like I said, dialogue is one of the things I pay the most attention to due to being born with a hearing impairment and how that disability has actually enhanced my minds focus on audio things because I have to pay more attention to it in order to get by, but I can't say too much about GoT dialogue due to no CC. So you may be absolutely right. The second episode smoothed out a lot of the dialogue that was disjointed in the first ep, and I haven't found reason to complain since. But I'll give it a strong look over in the next ep
I'm repeating myself (as usual), but your analysis is right, and I noticed it myself, but I'm not sure how much of a problem it really is. It is possible to mix and match antiquated and conventional dialogue. But it has to be done right, which I'm not sure if they're doing
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