critique my playing please?

***** Hand History for Game 2597396441 *****
$0.50/$1 Texas Hold'em - Thursday, August 25, 20:38:54 EDT 2005
Table Table 25384 (Real Money)
Seat 9 is the button
Total number of players : 10
Seat 2: mrdodo252 ( $37.25 )
Seat 3: shelbyloo500 ( $33.08 )
Seat 6: PhilzFlop ( $42.84 )
Seat 9: t3halbanat0r ( $21.75 )
Seat 7: Lookout333 ( $28.06 )
Seat 5: redroof ( $21.50 )
Seat 10: dreaminboi ( $8.25 )
Seat 4: Joookee ( $32.50 )
Seat 1: ppwep ( $25 )
Seat 8: TXTENNISPRO ( $25 )
dreaminboi posts small blind [$0.25].
ppwep posts big blind [$0.50].
TXTENNISPRO posts big blind [$0.50].
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to t3halbanat0r [ As 3d ]
mrdodo252 folds.
shelbyloo500 folds.
Joookee folds.
redroof calls [$0.50].
PhilzFlop calls [$0.50].
Lookout333 calls [$0.50].
TXTENNISPRO checks.
t3halbanat0r calls [$0.50].
dreaminboi folds.
ppwep checks.
** Dealing Flop ** [ Jh, 3c, Ac ]
ppwep checks.
redroof checks.
PhilzFlop bets [$0.50].
Lookout333 folds.
TXTENNISPRO folds.
t3halbanat0r raises [$1].
ppwep calls [$1].
redroof calls [$1].
PhilzFlop calls [$0.50].
** Dealing Turn ** [ 4s ]
ppwep checks.
redroof checks.
PhilzFlop bets [$1].
t3halbanat0r raises [$2].
ppwep folds.
redroof calls [$2].
PhilzFlop calls [$1].
** Dealing River ** [ 6c ]
redroof checks.
PhilzFlop bets [$1].
t3halbanat0r calls [$1].
redroof calls [$1].
PhilzFlop shows [ 5c, Kc ] a flush, ace high.
t3halbanat0r doesn't show [ As, 3d ] two pairs, aces and threes.
redroof doesn't show [ 3s, 3h ] three of a kind, threes.
PhilzFlop wins $15.50 from the main pot with a flush, ace high.
mrdodo252 has left the table.

is my play here right? i was trying to DTFH but it didn't quite work..
Philzflop is a calling station, and goes in with any two cards.. but yea can you critique my playing please.. i seem to have alot of problem with beats like these redroof is also a calling station and was not showing any aggression so i didnt put him on a set


EDIT-- not that i've kindof thought about it.. i think i played it wrong, underestimating redroof.. reading the hand history and realizing how owned i was without knowing it..

Party Poker 0.50/1 Hold'em (10 handed) FTR converter on zerodivide.cx

Preflop: Hero is Button with A, 3. CO posts a blind of $0.50.
3 folds, MP1 calls, MP2 calls, MP3 calls, CO (poster) checks, Hero calls, 1 fold, BB checks.

Flop: (6.50 SB) J, 3, A (6 players)
BB checks, MP1 checks, MP2 bets, MP3 folds, CO folds, Hero raises, BB calls, MP1 calls, MP2 calls.

Turn: (7.25 BB) 4 (4 players)
BB checks, MP1 checks, MP2 bets, Hero raises, BB folds, MP1 calls, MP2 calls.

River: (13.25 BB) 6 (3 players)
MP1 checks, MP2 bets, Hero calls, MP1 calls.

Final Pot: 16.25 BB

FYP.

is my play here right? i was trying to DTFH but it didn't quite work..
Philzflop is a calling station, and goes in with any two cards.. but yea can you critique my playing please.. i seem to have alot of problem with beats like these redroof is also a calling station and was not showing any aggression so i didnt put him on a set


EDIT-- not that i've kindof thought about it.. i think i played it wrong, underestimating redroof.. reading the hand history and realizing how owned i was without knowing it..

What is DTFH?
Don't worry about the set without him raising. He saved you money.
This is a obvious example of being results oriented, instead of considering what your best play was.
You played this hand perfectly. The fact that you were third doesn't matter.

sorry i'll convert next time, and thannks.. yeah the only reason i was caring so much about results that time was because the guy was totally owning me and hes a calling station.. but thanks for reassuring me of my play

Post flop you were fine, but preflop was horrible ... you gotta fold that Ace rag offsuit. With a suited A, the more people in preflop, the better your hand is because of the dead money that makes the flush draws profitable. It's the opposite with the offsuit ace. The more people in, the greater the chance someone has you dominated with an A with a bigger kicker. Even when you flop 2pair, a higher 2pair, or a paired board counterfeiting your 2nd pair will happen quite often. The only time I'll play A3o at a full table is if I can check the BB, or if I am folded to in the SB (or if the SB is checked to and raises then its reraise and play aggressive.)

I agree post flop play is good but yeah i have to agree with Xanadu playing A3o is not a good idea with a full table i hate Ax where x is an unsuited rag, it just loses you money over the long run when an ace hits the board and people start calling raises you know your probably beat, shorthanded games say 6max it is ok.
As for the post flop play this hand you probably know one of the players was drawing to a flush which was my first reaction this is great let them pay to draw like you did, they got lucky 66% of the time the third flush card wont come. As for the player with a legitamate hand the set well S£$% happens.

Good luck. and get rid of Axo.

Fold preflop and save yourself a world of pain

I agree with the others who said to fold preflop, however you did not, so...
The only thing I see that could probably been improved would be the strength of the betting. I would have raised to pot-size and made the flush draw pay big to stay in. Keeping a consistent strong line of betting might even have pushed out the trips fearing a higher set or the flush from you.

But either way, I wouldn't have carried A3o past the pre-flop betting.