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 Originally Posted by wufwugy
i guess you could say you don't think they're funny, but the concept is intact. a couple are a little rough, but the concept is doing just fine
No, no it's not. You're the North Pole to the concept's South Pole.
The first line should be something that, out of context, seems like something a gangsta would say but in context with the remainder of the text, seems like something a suburbanite would say in, say, casual conversation with a bunch of white dudes while at work on Wall St.
A suburbanite would not say "I ain't no bitch" or "Got my chrome plated nine mil, nigga" in casual conversation with a bunch of white dudes while at work on Wall St.
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