Hello, welcome to FTR.
I'm afraid you're not going to get much help based on this post, simply because the hand format is painful to read and is lacking suits.
Do you have the raw hand data ? If so, paste that, and I'll convert it. Or you can do this yourself by taking this link (which can be easily reached by clicking the "hand converter" link at the top of the page")...
...paste the raw hand data into the input box, hit "convert hand", then copy/paste the output into your forum post, and it will be much easier for people to read the hand.
Other important factors that need to be considered are any reads you have on villains, including tracking stats if you have them, and your image.
One minor point... it's better if results are not shown, as this tends to skew people's thoughts.
Here's an example of a nicely presented OP...
Note that weld has removed his final action and the results, and has given us as much info as he can on villains. The fact he butchered the hand is irrelevant, it's a good post.